Perfectly delivered, I don't think I could fault anything! Love your work ;)
Hilarious, rare occasion where swearing adds a lot more to it haha. Would love to see more.
Really awesome clip, deserving of the top spot! Extremely cute character and it was genuinely creepy when he started to get eaten. Please put more stuff up!
there's parts you can get stuck, the skill to do something decent is there but this is kinda lazy, maybe share around with friends before you publish, make actual characters and backgrounds.
I know that the game is poor but in reality it is not a game but the engine for a game that I was doing.
strong game, smooth play
Only had a couple of small bugs, like getting stuck when trying to get treasure. Very addictive, played the whole thing through. Would be great to be a part of such a project.
don't be so modest that was great. obviously have a fair amount of experience should do more improv stuff. if you can smoothly traverse several moods in one piece without crazy key changes and keep it original then you're doing well.
lyrical skill - 2
delivery/flow - 1
originality - 0
ability to double click on FL studio - 10
Lyrical skill- 4
Ability to take a joke- -5
Totally beat your score bro.
P.S It's very generous of you to give me a 2 in lyrical skill.
strong mood, average delivery
Can definitely feel what you're aiming for, the structure and mood is strong. If you're going to add those set pace drums though maybe also add something kind of eerie to take away from the piano's largesse only because it gets done a lot. But, very workable, very usable and moderate in quality for what you're putting together :) nice.
Incredible, a little dishonored-esque if I may say so :P
Made my freakin day...
don't be so modest
you've really gotten ur own style shining thru in here, very nice
I meant the character herself. xD
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