don't be so modest that was great. obviously have a fair amount of experience should do more improv stuff. if you can smoothly traverse several moods in one piece without crazy key changes and keep it original then you're doing well.
lyrical skill - 2
delivery/flow - 1
originality - 0
ability to double click on FL studio - 10
Lyrical skill- 4
Ability to take a joke- -5
Totally beat your score bro.
P.S It's very generous of you to give me a 2 in lyrical skill.
strong mood, average delivery
Can definitely feel what you're aiming for, the structure and mood is strong. If you're going to add those set pace drums though maybe also add something kind of eerie to take away from the piano's largesse only because it gets done a lot. But, very workable, very usable and moderate in quality for what you're putting together :) nice.
very well put together for what you used. had a catchy vibe going without having to resort to gimicky effects or edges too much.
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